Hello blogger today I have done a Blog post on a six sentence please leave a comment.
as the “ice cold sky” closed in on me I felt like a avalach!!! was going to happen.
I wotd to live in tawne not in an taker because I did wot to haf to no the avlach.
as the strange cold wintery ice Trickled down my back I felt cold As cold as an snow bag.
as the cold Julie snow trickled Dan my back my back I felt really!!! cold.
as the to haunted houses smashed apart the ice water froze into shards of glass ice.
as black spooky plants floated in the Frozen shards!!! of ice.
great imagination max.
ReplyDeletegreat imagination max.
ReplyDeleteKia ora Max,
ReplyDeleteYou're working hard to develop the descriptive vocabulary you are using in your writing! I can really visualise just how cold it is in your setting!