the killer

This week we have been learning about DASH? paragraphs for adventure stories.

• D = describe the setting

• A = use action
• S = use speech
• H = describe how the character is feeling
• ? = use a cliffhanger or rhetorical question

We wrote collaboratively and used a writing frame for this learning task, then we wrote our own paragraphs today.

As Max & Ben dash through the mountains hey could see a white gloomy slender man with his friend Aaron and Aaron had a jack hammer.”what was that rumbled maxI don’t know what it is

Is it a slenderman our Aaron gasped Ben.As slenderman got closer!!! He started to yell like a fluffy cat.”The slenderman said i will kill you two Max and Ben said the slenderman”slenderman was freezing cold and max had a shotgun. max was along and Ben had

a shotgun.’ max was along and Ben was never to be seen again.

I wonder is max going to see his best friend?

By Max